You never left me; a hidden fourth dimension to my existence.
Imperceptible
They never feel
Will never feel
The immortal symphony of love
Breaching the sky
Out of sight is never out of mind
Farewell fornever my dear
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Monday, April 12, 2010
Farewell Fornever
You never left me; a hidden fourth dimension to my existence.
Imperceptible
They never feel
Will never feel
The immortal symphony of love
Breaching the sky
Out of sight is never out of mind
Farewell fornever my dear
image via here
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This sounds way too final.....
I have learned to never say never,
..........:-) Hugs
see you sosoon! out of sight is not out of mind...and even if if it was there is still the heart to consider.
Oh, this is very sad...hold memories in your heart.
I responded to your kind comment on my blog. Thank you for all your caring and thoughtful suggestions. They are much appreciated. :)
Sadness colours your words in almost all of your writings...it s has this beautiful glow...and a flowering takes place.
Is it because there is a gap between the depth of your feelings and you age. In one you are outgrowing so rapidly the other...
And whatever it is your posts are gifts to me!
Bravo Maha!
Col
At first I thought you made a type. Very clever!
Oh my!
Girl-woman you write from the very core and heart.... THIS Is just AWESOME
Oh how I've Loved to read it-once and again!
Dulce
That's so sad Maha-it made my heart ache. Beautiful.
wow sad. And to make sad things (slightly) humorous I'm guessing this didin't come from personal experience
Just did your question post sorry it took so long
the sky must be breached -
love these allusions!
Sorry to disappoint you JP, but this one is very personal.
Your words carry the depth of the heartache associated with lost love, though I like the expression 'farewell fornever.'
sorry misinterpreted the meaning. Makes my comment seem lowbrow and I appologize for that
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