Friday, April 16, 2010

55-Silent Confessions




The insidious night wraps its dark covers around the windows of my room. A hoarse scream echoes through the walls, reflected right on my face, but I have no wish to hear. I cover my ears and sink deep under the quilts. But it’s there, eating up my innards. “It’s me, I killed him!”


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28 comments:

THE BEATY said...

wow that was great. Once again your writing style's amazing

Monkey Man said...

Great 55. Love the texture of your writing. My 55 will be HERE after midnight Pacific time.

Allie said...

hmm. i don't totally get this, but i really like it, and i'm sure it will have me thinking until i fall asleep...

=)

G-Man said...

The conscience never sleeps..
For most people anyway!
Fantastic 55 Maha..
What a future you have on this planet.
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Me said...

That was cool! Too bad it's for the 55, though. I want to know what happens next! :)

Ji said...

beautiful!
you are gifted!

Ji said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/55-rain-is-17/

here is mine,
thank you in advance for reading it.

Peter Stone said...

Your descriptions capture the sense of gloom so effectively. I wonder if the scream is from her memory, of a dark deed she's trying to escape...

My 55 is Molten Words

Oddyoddyo13 said...

I got chills from this. And mixed feelings. Very dark, but in awe.

Brian Miller said...

chilling 55 maha...iys me killing him...wow. nicely done.

my 55 is up!

clean and crazy said...

that was very intense, very poe like
great 55

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Very honest and powerful 55!
Well done!
Mine is up!

Jana said...

Great 55 Maha, very dark and edgy!
My 55 is up now.

järnebrand said...

Beautiful and thought-provoking. Lots of symbols and dark energy there. Well done. Love/ Jo.

Hootin' Anni said...

Oh my gosh....this is so vivid in word imagery!!

Loved your 55.

Sunrise in the City ---as always, scroll down below my Show n Tell. Hope you're having a terrific Friday!!!

Prayer Girl said...

Poe or maybe even Hitchcock?

Yes, this is a pretty dark 55, but I loved it.

I want to welcome you to my blog Maha. Thanks for visiting and leaving a comment so I could meet you.

PG

The Turning Point said...

Beautiful!

The conscience never sleeps.

Jim

Yvonne Osborne said...

The guilty conscience won't leave us alone, wrapping around the corners of the house. Nice edgy and dark 55. Just the way I like them!

Thanks! And thanks for joining my blog, by the way!

VE said...

I hate when I kill people too and then my conscience gets all high and mighty... ;)

Dulce said...

the consequences of killing... the *guilt* and all that you know!

You write so beautifully dear Maha!
;)
Dulce

Brian Miller said...

congrats on your perfect poet award as well. smiles.

Magpie said...

Intense and deeply touching. You have a powerful way with words. Lovely as always, Young One

sheri... said...

WOW! this is unsettling but i could 'feel' it...
thanks so much for your comment AND for following...you have honored me :) and you can be sure i'm going to keep an eye on you, too!

Leslie said...

How, what, why????

Really nicely done the plot unfolds...

Cheers

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jeff said...

... and poesy... ?
I love your reveries...:)
This blog is wonderful ! ! !

See you...:)

Mama Zen said...

Good one!

PattiKen said...

A guilty conscience makes a lousy bedmate. Good job!

KB said...

Fantastic writing! Keep up the good work.