The insidious night wraps its dark covers around the windows of my room. A hoarse scream echoes through the walls, reflected right on my face, but I have no wish to hear. I cover my ears and sink deep under the quilts. But it’s there, eating up my innards. “It’s me, I killed him!”
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26 comments:
wow that was great. Once again your writing style's amazing
hmm. i don't totally get this, but i really like it, and i'm sure it will have me thinking until i fall asleep...
=)
The conscience never sleeps..
For most people anyway!
Fantastic 55 Maha..
What a future you have on this planet.
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
That was cool! Too bad it's for the 55, though. I want to know what happens next! :)
beautiful!
you are gifted!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/55-rain-is-17/
here is mine,
thank you in advance for reading it.
Your descriptions capture the sense of gloom so effectively. I wonder if the scream is from her memory, of a dark deed she's trying to escape...
My 55 is Molten Words
I got chills from this. And mixed feelings. Very dark, but in awe.
chilling 55 maha...iys me killing him...wow. nicely done.
my 55 is up!
that was very intense, very poe like
great 55
Very honest and powerful 55!
Well done!
Mine is up!
Great 55 Maha, very dark and edgy!
My 55 is up now.
Beautiful and thought-provoking. Lots of symbols and dark energy there. Well done. Love/ Jo.
Oh my gosh....this is so vivid in word imagery!!
Loved your 55.
Sunrise in the City ---as always, scroll down below my Show n Tell. Hope you're having a terrific Friday!!!
Poe or maybe even Hitchcock?
Yes, this is a pretty dark 55, but I loved it.
I want to welcome you to my blog Maha. Thanks for visiting and leaving a comment so I could meet you.
PG
Beautiful!
The conscience never sleeps.
Jim
The guilty conscience won't leave us alone, wrapping around the corners of the house. Nice edgy and dark 55. Just the way I like them!
Thanks! And thanks for joining my blog, by the way!
I hate when I kill people too and then my conscience gets all high and mighty... ;)
the consequences of killing... the *guilt* and all that you know!
You write so beautifully dear Maha!
;)
Dulce
congrats on your perfect poet award as well. smiles.
Intense and deeply touching. You have a powerful way with words. Lovely as always, Young One
WOW! this is unsettling but i could 'feel' it...
thanks so much for your comment AND for following...you have honored me :) and you can be sure i'm going to keep an eye on you, too!
How, what, why????
Really nicely done the plot unfolds...
Cheers
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... and poesy... ?
I love your reveries...:)
This blog is wonderful ! ! !
See you...:)
A guilty conscience makes a lousy bedmate. Good job!
Fantastic writing! Keep up the good work.
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