Monday, April 12, 2010

Farewell Fornever



How I wish to recoil back to my dark solitude and let my eyes bleed for eternity. But alas! I am out of blood. And never again shall I wish for loneliness; it's embedded in my core.And what is it to be seen beyond the clouds but your face?


You never left me; a hidden fourth dimension to my existence.


Imperceptible


They never feel


Will never feel


The immortal  symphony of love


Breaching the sky


Out of sight is never out of mind


                              
Farewell fornever my dear                                                                                                                              



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15 comments:

Bernie said...

This sounds way too final.....
I have learned to never say never,
..........:-) Hugs

Brian Miller said...

see you sosoon! out of sight is not out of mind...and even if if it was there is still the heart to consider.

Magpie said...

Oh, this is very sad...hold memories in your heart.

I responded to your kind comment on my blog. Thank you for all your caring and thoughtful suggestions. They are much appreciated. :)

Craftsman of light said...

Sadness colours your words in almost all of your writings...it s has this beautiful glow...and a flowering takes place.

Is it because there is a gap between the depth of your feelings and you age. In one you are outgrowing so rapidly the other...

And whatever it is your posts are gifts to me!
Bravo Maha!

Col

Tracy said...

At first I thought you made a type. Very clever!

Dulce said...

Oh my!
Girl-woman you write from the very core and heart.... THIS Is just AWESOME

Oh how I've Loved to read it-once and again!

Dulce

Oddyoddyo13 said...

That's so sad Maha-it made my heart ache. Beautiful.

THE BEATY said...

wow sad. And to make sad things (slightly) humorous I'm guessing this didin't come from personal experience

THE BEATY said...

Just did your question post sorry it took so long

LarryG said...

the sky must be breached -
love these allusions!

Maha said...

Sorry to disappoint you JP, but this one is very personal.

Peter Stone said...

Your words carry the depth of the heartache associated with lost love, though I like the expression 'farewell fornever.'

Mama Zen said...

Absolutely lovely!

THE BEATY said...

sorry misinterpreted the meaning. Makes my comment seem lowbrow and I appologize for that

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