Nothing
Nothing
I listen so hard and drown all the other voices away, as I let my breathing go in sync with the song. But I can no longer get to the heart of it, I can no longer feel it
Nothing
Nothing
Looking at my reflection on water, I shout, "Who are you?" and the water vibrates. I let my hands get to the depth of the reflection, and I find it
Everything
Everything
18 comments:
what an intriguing take on the prompt...glad you found your everything. smiles.
beautiful! the key is to never walk away from the page --thanks for following my blog!
Wow. You're writing just takes my breath away.
eerily hypnotic...
glad you found the object of your search :)
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A really intriguing piece, Maha. I love how you inspire thought through your creativity.
Wow! Nice one!
Beautiful!!
wonderful
Maha: Thank-you for such a beautiful inspiration. Reflecting on the inner world makes the outer world that much more complete. To come full circle we all need a hug o' love!
ohhhhh.... i love this! The last part, brilliant. I can actually visualize myself there, very well done. Also makes me ponder, what 'everything' is
Thank you for visiting my blog. I think you are incredibly talented for your age. I find it a bit eerie and weird. Or maybe I was just too goofy at that age.
Very nicely done. It so often feels that way. You write beautifully.
Interesting -- reminds me of the question, where do you get your inspiration? Answer -- Just open a vein and let it bleed onto the page.
I've read it twice, I think I'll make it thrice. It's beautiful.
Clever! An attractive struggle.
Very well done Maha, how often we forget how far we are from ourselves....this is a nice reminder. What we tend to look for is most of the time the thing that is so close to us, is'nt it!
Very nicely done!
the struggle of every writer. nothing, nothing, and then - all of a sudden - everything! brilliant!
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