You shattered all my defenses
I stood
Too shocked to speak
You pushed me to the sidewalk
Blood mingled with tears
“Come back! Come back!”
I screamed
But you drove away
And never heard
You took the roots of love
Out of my heart
And left it
A cold machine
“Pump. Pump,”
Hear its dull beats
This is not the same old story
Of broken hearts
With misery
With every part of me
I write a new chapter
12 comments:
Creepy picture. But awesome. Lovely text as well.
nice. love how you used the sounds.
hearts heal, over time, and with new chapters...
this was lovely.
Beautifully written, but you were painfully vulnerable and abandoned ... no way to treat you ... let him keep driving ... away from you. ♡
Maha thank you for the follow. I appreciate your presence.
Your images. Your words. Intricate. Full of life, edged with pain. Pulsating.
I will be back.
I love your poems, especially from one so young!
You have some real talent here, keep up with the writing! It is beautiful and very moving too.
Your photos just fit the text beautifully!
Absolutely-bloody-fantastic! What a piece. I loved this. It is hard to bare yourself like that.
BRILLIANT! A beautifully written piece I can feel and visualize.
another one beautifully done.
and the pictures you choose are lovely as well! though, i have to admit, with your poem i pictured a city scene. ;)
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Remarkable and mesmerizing :).
Hey Ellie. Well, first thanks for visiting ;)
While writing this poem, I also pictured a city scene yet I chose this picture because I wanted something bleak.
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