Thursday, January 21, 2010

Reruns


“Tick, tock”

My present is passing

As I stand here alone

Watching from a distance

Reruns of the past

Tears

Break my shields

And you slip through the holes

Making me sink in you

Drowning my soul

The scars are fading

Only me and you remain

The pain's aching

Only me and you remain.

10 comments:

Gavin said...

"Only me and you remain."

I love that line.

Brian Miller said...

in the end at least you are not alone watching reruns...

dianne said...

"Making me sink in you, Drowning my soul"
Just beautiful Maha, to become one with and be all consumed by the one we love. xo ♡

ZeroCool said...

Awesome...:-)

Nahla said...

i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it
awesome
and beautiful <3 so true !!

Susan Deborah said...

Wow! look what you've got here. Maha sounds very Indian. Are you one? Thanks for coming by my place and oh I appreciate the following. Please do comment - They mean a lot for I get to know what you think on certain aspects of the topics I write.

Joy always,
Susan

Dawn said...

Thank you for visiting my blog and deciding to follow it! I really appreciate it. Thank you so much. Also, I would have to agree with Gavin--The "only me and you remain" line is wonderful.

Maha said...

Oh Susan, sorry to disappoint you, I'm not Indian.

Ellie said...

i've reread this poem 3 different times now and every time i do, something new shows up.
this one speaks to me on so many levels.
very powerful maha.

Venus said...

Really beautiful!