“Tick, tock”
My present is passing
As I stand here alone
Watching from a distance
Reruns of the past
Tears
Break my shields
And you slip through the holes
Making me sink in you
Drowning my soul
The scars are fading
Only me and you remain
The pain's aching
Only me and you remain.
10 comments:
"Only me and you remain."
I love that line.
in the end at least you are not alone watching reruns...
"Making me sink in you, Drowning my soul"
Just beautiful Maha, to become one with and be all consumed by the one we love. xo ♡
Awesome...:-)
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it
awesome
and beautiful <3 so true !!
Wow! look what you've got here. Maha sounds very Indian. Are you one? Thanks for coming by my place and oh I appreciate the following. Please do comment - They mean a lot for I get to know what you think on certain aspects of the topics I write.
Joy always,
Susan
Thank you for visiting my blog and deciding to follow it! I really appreciate it. Thank you so much. Also, I would have to agree with Gavin--The "only me and you remain" line is wonderful.
Oh Susan, sorry to disappoint you, I'm not Indian.
i've reread this poem 3 different times now and every time i do, something new shows up.
this one speaks to me on so many levels.
very powerful maha.
Really beautiful!
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