I plunged my hands deep into the texture of a scarred face. Recurrent echoes kept on floating back within the narrow walls of the room before fading into the grey lines on the frontiers of smoldered fancies. The image had a hole. “Do I get to be the same?” pouted girl with burnt eyes.
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18 comments:
So much in so few words, Maha...as always, your writing is electric and deeply poignant. This was a wonderful 55 :)
Wow.
Its that simply amazing.
Ohh! I see you are in this 55 words post stuff! Nice!
And well... as very few people you can drive me to a new landscape, a new melody you make me hear... a new instant you create in such few words!
The imagery here and feelings are incredible!!!
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Maha....
Quite a creative and talented mind you have...
Fabulous 55 My Friend.
Thanks for returning to the Friday Funfest, you were missed.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Wow!
Creatively written in only 55 words. Wonderful!
Beautifully succinct!
Creative and leave the imagination to go wild.
mine is here
MAHA, each time I read something out of your creative factory, I sit in awe. Minutes later I find my mouth is still open in disbelief of such a talent as you possess being right here online--for FREE! (I'm not kidding!)
For my "55" GO HERE
oh wow, so well written this is!
I agree with Sam. This was a beautiful 55. Lovely writing as always!
Crying ashen tears over this one. Great 55. My 55 is HERE .
Maha You amaze me all the time in a way so hard to me describe
this is just amazing. You must be amazing...
sigh
D.
First visit here ...but wow very powerful writing in 55 words...keep it up! :)
that's haunting!
I admire your mastery of words.
Have you considered writing a full story, Maha. One where solid and imaginative descriptions are pervasive?
How beautiful and authentic :).
If you managed to pick up a profound story and use this magnificant way of writing in it, the result will surely be dazzling.
SUPERB!
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