Friday, June 25, 2010

55-Girl with Burnt Eyes

I plunged my hands deep into the texture of a scarred face. Recurrent echoes kept on floating back within the narrow walls of the room before fading into the grey lines on the frontiers of smoldered fancies. The image had a hole. “Do I get to be the same?” pouted girl with burnt eyes.


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18 comments:

Sam Liu said...

So much in so few words, Maha...as always, your writing is electric and deeply poignant. This was a wonderful 55 :)

Oddyoddyo13 said...

Wow.

Its that simply amazing.

Lu Ann said...

Ohh! I see you are in this 55 words post stuff! Nice!

And well... as very few people you can drive me to a new landscape, a new melody you make me hear... a new instant you create in such few words!

The Thirteenth Crossing said...

The imagery here and feelings are incredible!!!

55 Flash Fiction Friday: DECODE

g-man said...

Maha....
Quite a creative and talented mind you have...
Fabulous 55 My Friend.
Thanks for returning to the Friday Funfest, you were missed.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Mama Zen said...

Wow!

Roxy said...

Creatively written in only 55 words. Wonderful!

bard said...

Beautifully succinct!

moondustwriter said...

Creative and leave the imagination to go wild.

mine is here

steveroni said...

MAHA, each time I read something out of your creative factory, I sit in awe. Minutes later I find my mouth is still open in disbelief of such a talent as you possess being right here online--for FREE! (I'm not kidding!)

For my "55" GO HERE

Shadow said...

oh wow, so well written this is!

Mr. Stupid said...

I agree with Sam. This was a beautiful 55. Lovely writing as always!

Monkey Man said...

Crying ashen tears over this one. Great 55. My 55 is HERE .

Dulce said...

Maha You amaze me all the time in a way so hard to me describe
this is just amazing. You must be amazing...
sigh

D.

Lulda Casadaga said...

First visit here ...but wow very powerful writing in 55 words...keep it up! :)

Jingle said...

that's haunting!
I admire your mastery of words.

Expression of the mind said...

Have you considered writing a full story, Maha. One where solid and imaginative descriptions are pervasive?

How beautiful and authentic :).

If you managed to pick up a profound story and use this magnificant way of writing in it, the result will surely be dazzling.

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