tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post7438359668664767793..comments2023-09-28T16:29:42.607+03:00Comments on My Reverie...: AsthmaticMahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09044365084432889661noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-45842163799196141422010-04-05T16:29:33.775+02:002010-04-05T16:29:33.775+02:00Maha You are a very talented and imaginative write...Maha You are a very talented and imaginative writer. I love your poems, they are amazing. Your short stories encompass the reader in the world of the protagonist. Excellent descriptions and mood. Insightful and deep as well. Please keep writing! Bravo!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-59153986448090815932010-04-04T19:09:53.742+02:002010-04-04T19:09:53.742+02:00Your words are lovely.Your words are lovely.Angie Muresanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13830360358541367259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-59049021231256451612010-04-04T16:43:49.130+02:002010-04-04T16:43:49.130+02:00I agree with Brian...I love a mix of both styles. ...I agree with Brian...I love a mix of both styles. They each have their own unique appeal but bring the same wordcraft and soul to the table. I can understand how hard it would be not to be able to enjoy the night air.<br />Happy Easter to you!Magpiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01132555347136919591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-24601971520848025362010-04-04T16:36:03.269+02:002010-04-04T16:36:03.269+02:00lovely. i enjoyed your piecelovely. i enjoyed your pieceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-18183754521450911662010-04-04T11:41:43.748+02:002010-04-04T11:41:43.748+02:00i have been missing a lot lately....
Now as far as...i have been missing a lot lately....<br />Now as far as your question is concerned....i'd say ' follow your heart'...when it comes in like a song sing it! And when it comes in like a silence.... listen to it!Craftsman of lighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747434398075620991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-55762690157432877622010-04-04T03:56:12.125+02:002010-04-04T03:56:12.125+02:00sad same thing happens to 1 of my freinds. Favorit...sad same thing happens to 1 of my freinds. Favorite part of 1984... hmm I loved the times when theres the whole mind blowing philisophical questions like changing the past an such. Also I do love your prose though your poetrys also awsome hmm might have to think about it...THE BEATYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06707403512875881799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-48249586767961294032010-04-04T03:33:10.998+02:002010-04-04T03:33:10.998+02:00love this post1love this post1Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-19484697374374336072010-04-04T01:28:39.633+02:002010-04-04T01:28:39.633+02:00hmmmmm, wondering if this was a true story. To so...hmmmmm, wondering if this was a true story. To some the mother may seem menacing, but as a mother of one with asthma, I could tell it was out of love and fear. But I see the daughter's point of view,too because I was once a daughter. :) I liked it.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05440632162084471888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-39209363063523003822010-04-03T20:19:50.251+02:002010-04-03T20:19:50.251+02:00Enjoyed this piece very much. This prose rings wit...Enjoyed this piece very much. This prose rings with poetic tones and shows a slice of life that resonates with many. Nice!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-50104416535158319212010-04-03T20:13:37.117+02:002010-04-03T20:13:37.117+02:00Brian, I am actually asthmatic and this story is b...Brian, I am actually asthmatic and this story is based on some situations I had to go through just to sneak and breathe the beautiful cold air. I still sneak, but I kinda developed a sixth sense towards doorknobs, and I never get caught :PMahahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09044365084432889661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-51543499743198476312010-04-03T20:11:30.057+02:002010-04-03T20:11:30.057+02:00Sad story, but so good!
In answer to your question...Sad story, but so good!<br />In answer to your question, hard to say... I really think you are SO GOOD at both!... as any writer!<br />:)Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-52056088272607931782010-04-03T19:53:47.508+02:002010-04-03T19:53:47.508+02:00Beautiful words of a sad story. You have such a wa...Beautiful words of a sad story. You have such a way with words! Hugs from Germany, Paula xxPaulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07241317042459836045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-41955985835192353482010-04-03T19:22:16.755+02:002010-04-03T19:22:16.755+02:00i am all for a regular mix of both...i think they ...i am all for a regular mix of both...i think they use similar skills yet with dramatic different effect...<br /><br />beutiful tale, yet sad...<br /><br />i was asthmatic as a child but grew out ofit...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-78153148737193868512010-04-03T18:59:19.796+02:002010-04-03T18:59:19.796+02:00I say prose. That doesn't mean that you are be...I say prose. That doesn't mean that you are better in prose, just that I like it better. :)<br />I think you have the ability to use words wittily. All the way to the ending that always is something else than expected. You rock. :)RAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922537526607315266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-82310859168816994542010-04-03T18:22:37.183+02:002010-04-03T18:22:37.183+02:00This was so sweet, and sad. I'm not sure if yo...This was so sweet, and sad. I'm not sure if you were better at prose or poetry, but right off the top of my head......poetry. But the thing with both of them is that they improve with time, so that a year from now or so, I wouldn't be able to decide to save my life!Oddyoddyo13https://www.blogger.com/profile/05557994037779209704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-32389403421102404642010-04-03T18:02:00.305+02:002010-04-03T18:02:00.305+02:00Not sure yet, between prose and poetry. I like pr...Not sure yet, between prose and poetry. I like prose better, less formal and confined.<br />I especially am struck by your phrase she loved the air,<br />beautiful.Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18323454057921441274noreply@blogger.com