tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post3979909291961748289..comments2023-09-28T16:29:42.607+03:00Comments on My Reverie...: Metallic PaintsMahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09044365084432889661noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-47156987451786840692010-08-20T11:05:18.052+02:002010-08-20T11:05:18.052+02:00Ohhhhhhhhh Maha..
i'm really sorry
Be happy ...Ohhhhhhhhh Maha..<br />i'm really sorry<br /><br /><br />Be happy if u can..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-45007913664009987722010-08-20T07:01:03.461+02:002010-08-20T07:01:03.461+02:00Feel that sense - running, seeking, grasping
real...Feel that sense - running, seeking, grasping<br /><br />really great emotion conveyed Maha<br /><br />nicely done for One Shot<br /><br />Moon Smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-1310768801287715282010-08-20T00:18:52.534+02:002010-08-20T00:18:52.534+02:00Hey.... its beautifulHey.... its beautifulHere I scribblehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04243516559336608938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-58438022450083181752010-08-19T23:22:14.941+02:002010-08-19T23:22:14.941+02:00This echoes with despair. Nowhere to be, nowhere t...This echoes with despair. Nowhere to be, nowhere to go. Well done.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-65414865571476532052010-08-19T20:08:36.883+02:002010-08-19T20:08:36.883+02:00I like the gravity and swing of your words! Thank...I like the gravity and swing of your words! Thank YOU for finding my blog...<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Warm Aloha from Waikiki :) <br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-63036346734386624802010-08-19T18:04:01.823+02:002010-08-19T18:04:01.823+02:00Very well done!Very well done!Markhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08237538988856751173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-49138100815698194402010-08-19T13:14:59.574+02:002010-08-19T13:14:59.574+02:00Great poem dear Maha, it has an under running curr...Great poem dear Maha, it has an under running current of urgency and escape from a feared reality.<br />xoxoxo ♡diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06171808338793139579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-51589663765001814542010-08-19T10:43:35.508+02:002010-08-19T10:43:35.508+02:00soothe ourselves by lies - caught long ago behind ...soothe ourselves by lies - caught long ago behind metallic-painted bars - gives a feeling of being alone and desolate in some way...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-46290460397288758752010-08-19T10:29:41.625+02:002010-08-19T10:29:41.625+02:00there was some beautiful word usage and flow withi...there was some beautiful word usage and flow within this piece..a great poem for one shot..cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-37245305215182021622010-08-19T09:25:40.998+02:002010-08-19T09:25:40.998+02:00is this the moment fantasy and reality collide?is this the moment fantasy and reality collide?Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-58084933878667921042010-08-19T06:28:45.185+02:002010-08-19T06:28:45.185+02:00i remember my Maha Love, thx.
Very nice.
God bless...i remember my Maha Love, thx.<br />Very nice.<br />God bless.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-45353008349386711332010-08-19T02:21:01.752+02:002010-08-19T02:21:01.752+02:00This sent shivers up and down my spine.This sent shivers up and down my spine.Oddyoddyo13https://www.blogger.com/profile/05557994037779209704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-76436111967757794992010-08-19T00:31:59.918+02:002010-08-19T00:31:59.918+02:00You also make me pause and reflect in a good way. ...You also make me pause and reflect in a good way. A haunting piece I agree with the other comments. Beautifully written. Quite stirring.<br /><br />cheers,<br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-62292994223827072862010-08-19T00:04:47.064+02:002010-08-19T00:04:47.064+02:00You capture a feeling of desolation, both in spiri...You capture a feeling of desolation, both in spirit and finding there is nowhere to go. The poem made me think of artists being imprisoned for their graffiti and then noticing the paint on the jail bars at the end. Thanks for being a part of One Shot this week! cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-79395148794458407432010-08-18T23:55:09.705+02:002010-08-18T23:55:09.705+02:00Nice ..todays, yesterdays and the past..that so ad...Nice ..todays, yesterdays and the past..that so add to our memories and reveries!<br /><br />'where else to go?" twice maybe redundant!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-22840083637633905922010-08-18T23:47:18.374+02:002010-08-18T23:47:18.374+02:00You have some stellar imagery tucked inside this l...You have some stellar imagery tucked inside this lovely poem. And it falls so lightly. Beautiful.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-10897364476909628332010-08-18T23:42:21.024+02:002010-08-18T23:42:21.024+02:00A poignant and stirring piece, Maha. I agree with ...A poignant and stirring piece, Maha. I agree with Brian, there is definitely a sense of haunting realism to this poem. In truth, we are all running away from something.Sam Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01014838954712295981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-60398928768383518562010-08-18T22:41:10.768+02:002010-08-18T22:41:10.768+02:00interesting read maha...seems a bit different than...interesting read maha...seems a bit different than your usual...seems like life has caught up with this one...and i wonder how far they will run from the sirens before it catches up...good to see you over at oneshot!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5693335073665293115.post-35002302241094103342010-08-18T22:40:16.715+02:002010-08-18T22:40:16.715+02:00just beautiful, maha! beautiful!just beautiful, maha! beautiful!GYPSYWOMANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03042621041213415958noreply@blogger.com